How do you like this poem. Be Honest!? - honest getaways downunder
My Getaway
A place where you can go Just Breathe
On all the stress and pressure
You may think your opinion is not clean and
Lying on the couch and let it sink
In a world of fear
What you can do what he wants and not in a hurry
Take the responsibility to do in order to
In this world, everyone can start again
You can do what he wants
It's like a fresh start, far from foreign countries
Unfortunately not too difficult
As difficult as trying to extend
But not too much, because there will always
If, once again, the thoughts may wander astray
And again, with this peacefuCity of
Friday, February 12, 2010
Honest Getaways Downunder How Do You Like This Poem. Be Honest!?
4 comments:
wow
Poetry in general, much cr @ p
But I liked it
Okay. Lying on a couch ... I think you should "a"
there. And the last line seems a bit thrown together. = / As you hurry to finish. I think it is something to repeat, or a better finish than that. And you have to make a model with better verses. You have 2, 4, 4, 2, 2, 1 I think if we try to draw a picture work. And, in line thirteen, but not too much? Do not drive too? = /
My opinion.
I've been there. It `s called" My Bed ". That `s Why I love sleeping problems and hello goodbye sweet dreams!
Since the end had seemed to stop just below the line.
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